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Sage's Elixir

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Moss, mushrooms and light... Some ingredients to create a magic potion.

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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

I like how you cut the picture into thirds and put the mushroom to the side. That's a basic , but extremely effective technic. I suggest a few more sharp, defined lines to give it that "pop" or "wow" effect. The yellow back round was a good choice, but it needs another color because when you move your eyes to the top it looks bland. I'd also suggest moving the name to another less noticeable spot. The name takes away from the enchantment aspect of the picture. I love it over all so keep up the good work, listen and consider some of some other critiques too and it will be practically perfect in every way. Don't worry about "I am not sure if I can do this or that" or " Will some one notice this" . Don' change your over all style , just tinker a little and you will be fine.