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Copyright © João Pedro de Almeida. All rights reserved!
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Featured: Feature I | Feature II | Feature III | Feature IV | Feature V | Feature VI | Feature VII
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Date Taken
Dec 25, 2014, 6:29:50 AM
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Okay overall, but your composition is off and really removes any lingering effect this image was intending to have.
Personally, and I think the golden rule ratio for art too, it would make sense to have raised the camera up so there was more space above the frame.
Since that one piece of grass right now is touching the top of the frame, and basic art rules dictate not to do that, its just not compositionally sound.
I would have, personally, had more space above and more to the left, and cut out the space to the right a bit.
Personally I don't have much joy for grass, it doesn't really do anything that billions of photographers haven't done before, and while the colours are nice, nothing really comes of this picture.
Try finding out what type of photographer you want to be, and try making a path to get there. Do you always want to take photos of flowers? If so, learn composition and get a nicer lens, perhaps even go find more rarer flowers and see nature interacting with it.
Overall, fine, but not particularly interesting or compositionally strong.